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Wednesday 5 April 2017

that was summer poem

That Was Summer!
I remember smelling the delicious BBQ when I went camping with my family.
I remember tasting the delicious chocolate melting ice cream.
I remember seeing the beautiful sunset down to rest for tomorrow.
That was summer
I remember feeling the cool breeze on my face.
I remember hearing the bird singing a sweet song.
That was summer.
By Matua
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  1. Anonymous20 June 2017 at 12:16

    Hi Matua my name is Alex and I am a student from St. Bernadette's School. I really like your summer poem and how you told us what summer is to you. Next time maybe you could delete some spaces because the sentences were too far apart. I look forward to seeing more work from you.

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  2. Anonymous28 June 2017 at 12:07

    Thank you alex

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