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Friday 25 November 2016

matua Persuasive writing


In my opinion I think if I could have a superpower it would be mind reading.If I could mind read I could tell what everyone was thinking. If I went to the shop and someone looked at me, I could tell if they were thinking I was ugly and I would remember for the rest of my life. If someone was thinking to beat up a small kid, I could warn them and help them defend themselves.I could tell if people were thinking good or bad things about me. If people were thinking bad things about me, I could just tell the teacher. But if people were thinking good things about me, I would feel good about myself.If I asked someone a question, and I couldn’t mind read  I would not be able to tell if they are lying or not. If i asked someone a very important question ,for my school work and they lied i would get the question wrong. If I asked someone a non important question and they lied it wouldn’t matter that much but I would still be mad because they lied

Friday 4 November 2016

Matua persuasive writing


i am learning about persuasive writing
                   



In my opinion I think scootering should be banned at all schools.



Scootering is dangerous to others and yourself when you go fast on the  scooters. Because the scooters are solid like a hard metal bar and go very fast they can easily injure someone. Small kids can easily be knocked over because they often aren’t watching.

Scootering can end up dominating the playground because they need room to gain speed. You need a certain  place for scooters at morning tea and lunch times so they are not dominating other playground spaces  and ruining set up games. There is limited space in most playgrounds.

Scootering is a very very dangerous sport. Some of the tricks are very dangerous like spinning a scooter around the rider's head.
Riders don't always wear safety gear because they can’t be bothered and it might take too long to put the gear on. This can lead to horrible injuries like breaks, scrapes and bruises. In my opinion I think all the principals should  ban scooters from schools.