Matua persuasive writing

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In my opinion I think scootering should be banned at all schools.

Scootering is dangerous to others and yourself when you go fast on the  scooters. Because the scooters are solid like a hard metal bar and go very fast they can easily injure someone. Small kids can easily be knocked over because they often aren’t watching.

Scootering can end up dominating the playground because they need room to gain speed. You need a certain  place for scooters at morning tea and lunch times so they are not dominating other playground spaces  and ruining set up games. There is limited space in most playgrounds.

Scootering is a very very dangerous sport. Some of the tricks are very dangerous like spinning a scooter around the rider's head.

Riders don't always wear safety gear because they can’t be bothered and it might take too long to put the gear on. This can lead to horrible injuries like breaks, scrapes and bruises. In my opinion I think all the principals should  ban scooters from schools.